This week we have been creating a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. Thanks!
Think about using your senses. Smell, taste, hear, feel, see.
Remember to use correct punctuation and spelling.
Remember to use similes, and adjectives.
Use correct sentences.
kia ora arabella. i like your week what you are doing. can you moke post in your blog so i can comments on it bye.
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Hello Arabella.I have had a look at your post but there was no story to read.Can you please let me know when you write it so I can read it and comment.Thanks.Have a great day.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Arabella.
ReplyDeleteThis is just to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Have a good day.
Thanks Mrs Cassidy it was gliching because my story was going off the page thats why i couldent post any story ok bye. from Arabella:)
ReplyDeleteKia ora April i will hopefully have something on my blog soon. from Arabella :)
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