Monday, February 17, 2020
The People That You Have Never Seen Before
Kia ora tatou happy new year. this post is about aliens please comment!
One night I went to a friends house, her name is Mikaylah. I Requested to watch a scary movie, Mikaylah said “sure nothing bad will happen RIGHT” I said “well yea its just a movie” ( 10 hours later) it was 3:00 then all of a sudden I heard a big CAAAPOSHSHSHSHSH. Me and Mikaylah went to go check it out. We where so scared that we tip toed outside then we saw something glowing in the night, it grabbed Mikaylah’s hand so I yea Kicked it in the wrong tables. So we run back inside and just watch our chromebooks with a blanket on our body and head we were so tired that we went to bed and the aliens grab our head and put us in there ship when we were sleeping. We woke up one our later in a alien machine the splats them into goo and we were up next… But just in time Mikaylahs Mum ame and freed us. She gave us a fire gun ( its called a fire gun because it has fire bullets) and we started to shoot the aliens until they vanished we run back to Mikaylah’s house and called 111. Then the police came and Solders even Jicenda Ardern then we all were safe. The End
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Kia ora Arabella.What a fascinating story.I am glad that I didn't read it at night as I'm sure I wouldn't of slept.You have used some interesting words and it made me want to read on. The name Jacinda Ardern sounds familiar,who is she and what made you use her name in your story?.I look forward to hearing from you.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Arabella, thanks for sharing your story. I am so pleased Mikaylah's mum rescued you both! Remember to use fullstops at the end of a sentence and start a new paragraph for each new idea, this will help the reader and make your writing look fantastic.
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Hi Arabella.
ReplyDeleteThis is just a message to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
I was going to comment on one of your other posts but they are from last year.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Hi Arabella
ReplyDeleteYours is the first blog I have even seen. I didn't even know what one was!! I am glad Mikaylah's mum rescuced you before you go turned into goo. Who is Jacinda Ardern?
Kia ora Arabella. Later on I will be going for a walk with my daughter and dog in Waterloo Park.What fun things are you and your family going to be doing today?.I look forward to your reply.
ReplyDeleteGood evening Arabella.I hope all is going well for you and your family.I have been busy checking out all the children's blogs and leaving comments.I have also been going on walks and helping my elderly neighbour.
ReplyDeleteWhat have you been doing?.I look forward to your reply.
Hello Arabella.I am going to take my dog for a walk later.I might even go on my roller blades when I do.I would like to hear what you have been doing during these holidays.I look forward to hearing from you.
ReplyDeleteFantastic story Arabella! Your imagination is fantastic! I look forward to reading more story’s from you.
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