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Thursday, August 6, 2020

The Wishes

Kia ora. This is a story that I made about me dying but i'm not dead. I'm only 9 years old. well enjoy reading goodbye!



One night I woke up with a bad cold… Then I heard a weird noise! I looked out my window and saw some builders it looked like they were working on or building a well. Everyday I was dying. My parents were upset, they rang the Hospital every day. They really wanted me to still be alive with them but I couldent. 3 months later… it has been three months of me suffering and swallowing  medicene day after day. My parents went outside to see if the well was finished and it was they bought 100 coins outside and wished for me to stay alive. They went out to the well each day they wished and wished but I was still dying. They were crying I couldent handle the fact that they were crying so one night I went into the lounge falling but getting up again. I made it to the lounge my parents picked me up and placed me on the couch and hugged me as tight as a shoe lase can be. My mum put me into my bed and I fell asleep. It came to my last day of being alive. My parents made their last wish. It was for me to be happy when i’m gone. Then they put me back inside and gave me some nice soup for me to eat. I was about to go but they asked what I wanted before I left. “ what I-I would want is to live under the well with you guys, get all the wish’s I wanted.” I said. “I want to grant wishes with little dwarfs helping me and you guys writing how many wish’s i've given but sadly I cant do that… Goodbye I love you guys i’ll always be in this house with you…” Well i've died its a sad time but I shared my thoughts with everyone that is reading.


1 comment:

  1. This is very well written Arabella! Well done! Very sad though. I’m glad it’s just a story.

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